Sunday 24th of November 2024

Corrected correction (Paul Marx)

I recently have had the pleasure of reading the publication, 'Not Happy, John!'.

I note, however, that there is a typographical error on page 151 of the paperback edition.

The second sentence on that page reads as follows:

'Giurgola did his best to honour the original intent by designing broad, sweeping lawns so that people could use to walk right across the top of their elected representatives.'

I presume that the 20th word of that sentence should have read 'them'.

Yours faithfully,
Paul Marx.

NHJ!(HA): Well spotted Paul, but wouldn't it flow better if we just cut the fifteenth word, 'so'?